Ooh, la,la! Take a look at the elements of letter writing that you have in your piece--date, greeting, body of your message and closure. You are also are using ending marks/punctuation correctly, good spacing, evidence of correct spelling, and inquiry! I even recognized a lead that jumped right into the action and you included satisfying ending to your letter. Ah, Grace's "Power of the Pen!"
Ooh, la,la! Take a look at the elements of letter writing that you have in your piece--date, greeting, body of your message and closure. You are also are using ending marks/punctuation correctly, good spacing, evidence of correct spelling, and inquiry!
ReplyDeleteI even recognized a lead that jumped right into the action and you included satisfying ending to your letter. Ah, Grace's "Power of the Pen!"
Thank you!
ReplyDeleteGrace, I don't like the time change either. Are you used to the change yet? You wrote a great letter to the president. I wonder if he will write back?
ReplyDeleteI like that you have a writing portfolio on your blog! Keep writing, girlie!
ReplyDelete